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PostSubject: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai - Meakashi-hen - Chapter 14   Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:13 am

Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai
Meakashi-hen

Chapter 14: The Gullible

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PostSubject: Re: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai - Meakashi-hen - Chapter 14   Sun Dec 12, 2010 7:34 am

Thanks for continuing this project for so long. Because I always read your translations, I suppose I should put in my suggestions. I think that others should post their suggestions as well, because there may be problems in mine.

Page 71:
panel 2:
Original text: I often come here and thought about various things.
Suggested text: I often came here and thought about various things.

panel 3:
Original text: Takano-San let me knowing about the history of Hinamizawa.
Suggested text 1: Takano-San let me know know about the history of Hinamizawa
Suggested text 2: Takano-San told me about the history of Hinamizawa.

Panel 3:
Original text: And this time I will tell similar story to Keiichi...
Suggested text 1: And this time I will tell a similar story to Keiichi...
Suggested text 2: And this time I will tell the story to Keiichi...

Page 72:
Panel 4:
Original text: and how is this family inheritor like.
Suggested text: and how this family is inheritor like.

Page 73:
Panel 3
*note* This isn't really much of a mistake*
Original Text: Such a terrible timing!
Suggested text: Such terrible timing!

Page 74:
Panel 1:
Original Text: There were lots of polices in cover.
Suggested Text1: There were lots of police undercover.
Suggested Text 2: There were a lot of police undercover.

Panel 1:
Original text: For sure they have seen the last persons with the two victims Takano-San and Tomitake-San.
Suggested Text 1: For sure, they had seen the last people with the two victims, Takano-San and Tomitake-San.
Suggested Text 2: For sure, they had seen the last people to meet the two victims, Takano-San and Tomitake-San.

Panel 3:
Orginal Text: Hitting both Sonozaki sisters,
Suggested text: Hitting on both Sonozaki Sisters,

Panel 3:
Original text: The way he act...
Suggested text: The way he acts...

Panel 5:
Original text: The situation turn sour:
Suggested text (if past tense): The situation turned sour.
Suggested text (if present tense): The situation is turning sour.

Panel 5:
Original text: Keiichi won't hold a good image on me.
Suggested text: Keiichi won't hold a good image of me.

Page 75:
Panel 2:
Original text: Is he purposely trying to make me feeling unpleasant!?
Suggested text: Is he purposely trying to make me feel unpleasant!?

Panel 3:
Original Text: He Plan to... Get rid of my presence here, by indicating that if I do not go away, then he will expose even more stuffs.
Suggested Text: He Plans to... Get rid of my presence here, by indicating that if I do not go away, then he will expose even more stuff.

Page: 76:
Panel 4:
Original text: But next time I won't give away like that!
Suggested text: But next time I won't give in like that!

Page 77:
Panel 1:
Original text: Today meeting will be as tense as those meetings of Sonozaki Main House.
Suggested Text: Today's meeting will be as tense as the meetings of the Sonozaki Main House.

Page 79:
Panel 5:
Original Text: everyone probably have known by now.
Suggested text 1: everyone probably has known by now.
Suggested text 2: everyone probably has learned by now.

Page 80:
Panel 2:
Original text: has found a body of a man.
Suggested text: had found the body of a man.

Panel 4:
Original text: It seems they found the body of a woman on Gifu Mountain burning to death in an oil drum, and immediately after identifying the identity.
Suggested text: It seems they found the body of a woman on Gifu Mountain burnt to death in an oil drum. Immediately after identifying the identity

Original Text: They concluded that the victim is Takano Miyo-San.
Suggested text: They concluded that the victim was Takano Miyo-San.

Page 83:
Panel 4:
Original text: and bring their impurities in.
Suggested text: and brought their impurities in.

Page 84:
Panel ?:
Original text: A bunch of insolent brats, even if we tear off their guts, it probably won't still be not enough!
Suggested text: A bunch of insolent brats! Even if we tear out their guts, it probably still won't be enough!

Page 86:
Panel 2:
Original Text: They will not hesitate to carry out the curse to those anger Oyashiro-Sama in Oyashiro-Sama place.
Suggested text: They will not hesitate to carry out the curse to those who anger Oyashiro-Sama in Oyashiro-Sama's place.

Original Text: they would probably turn the blind eyes in the event.
Suggested text: they would probably turn a blind eye to the event.

Original text: If I'm hang to death right here,
Suggested text: If I'm hung to death right here,

Original text: "Mion do no participate the meeting"...
Suggested text: "Mion did not participate in the meeting"...

Original text: "Demoned Away" will complete...
Suggested text: "Demoned Away" will be complete...

Page 88:
Panel 4:
Original text: The Shion that he always love is facing "Demoned away"...
Suggested Text: The Shion that he always loved is facing being "Demoned away"...

Page 89:
Panel 1:
Original text: into ritual tools temple would face the curse of Oyashiro-Sama.
Suggested text: into the ritual tools temple will face the curse of Oyashiro-Sama.

Original text: I think she probably know that Ritual Tools Temple is Sacred, but didn't expect it's that much.
Suggested text: I think she probably knows that the Ritual Tool Temple is Sacred, but didn't expect it's that much.

Page 90:
Panel 2:
Original text After all if Shion's not killed, then she will forever not be able to see the sunlight.
Suggested text After all, if Shion's not killed, then she will never be able to see the sunlight.

Page 93:
Panel 2:
Original Text: It's truth... Only Elder Kimiyoshi stand on my side.
Suggested Text: It's the truth... Only Elder Kimiyoshi stands on my side.

Original text: Only Elder Kimiyoshi say he will forgive Shion...
Suggested text: Only Elder Kimiyoshi says he will forgive Shion...

Page 95:
Panel 4:
Original text: and she had to plucked out her three nails. About that, I did hear.
Suggested text: and she had to pluck out her three nails. I did hear about that.

Page 97
Panel 1:
Original text: ...those pains that really hurts...!?
Suggested text: ...those pains that really hurt...!?

Panel 3
Original text: That's why, I had to stand against so much pains.
Suggested text: That's why I had to stand against so much pain.

Panel 4:
Original text: ...that thank to that, everything was forgiven...
Suggested text: ...that, thanks to that, everything was forgiven...

Page 100
Panel 3:
Original text: But Satoshi-Kun is just their children...
Suggested text: But Satoshi-Kun was just their child...

Panel 6:
Original text: ...But we never mention that so clearly.
Suggested text: ...But we never mentioned that so clearly.

Page 101:
Panel 2:
Original text: It was my mistaken calling him that. Please accept my apologise!
Suggested text: It was my mistake calling him that. Please accept my apology!

Panel 3:
Original text: If anything happened on the Houjous,
Suggested text: If anything happened to the Houjous,

Original text: but because was part of the Houjous, then is also a dirty brat.
Suggested text: but because he was part of the Houjous, then he is also a dirty brat.

Original text: The problem lied right on that way of thinking which has spreaded all over the village.
Suggested text: The problem was that way of thinking which has spread all over the village.

Page 102:
Panel 1?:
Original text: And you all woshipped on that disease.
Suggested text: And you all worshiped that disease.

Panel 2?:
Original text: Why all those sins, punishments, insults have to fall on him!?
Suggested text: Why did all those sins, punishments, insults have to fall on him!?


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PostSubject: Re: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai - Meakashi-hen - Chapter 14   Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:11 am

Whoooooaaa @_@
There're a lot!!

Really thank you! I'll update and release v2.

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